Home Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

explore the pain before it rains... hmm i have to say this line is bouncing up and down in my thoughts

Home is where the heart is.Very useful content here.Cheers.

This is really good and beautiful! You were right i love it

very well written. Keep up the good work. Your readers are eagerly waiting for more. Inform me when you have more for me to read. :)

...Before it rains. Well written, unfortunately not all of us can skip the pain. pain is like a scar, you always have a reminder. and although it seems to have healed you will always carry the mark of the wounded, to remind you through the day of the loss you have felt. Home is a place you share with someone and it shields you from that pain. But when that someone is there no more, your home turns into a coffin. nice write tho.

i am with Odion in explaining the last phrase..and this is nice a poem i must say...

There is no place like home - true

IT DESERVES THE COMMENT DIRECT STRAIGHT U TAUGHT ME SOMETHING GLAD I AM HERE WILL SEEK TO BE HERE MORE OFTEN ITS A POETS PARADISE OF LEARNING BLESS

Very very well written poem. Also, Well thought of poem. Nice job.

Very creative acrostic poem this is! The last line 'before it rains' caught my mind hard...great phrase! well lets see, what do i think about this..i think that part signifies despair....rain symbolizes life, but on the other hand, it also depicts grief (as tears) in some cases. But in this poem, i think 'before it rains' means 'before you die'....it makes sense! ! explore your fate before you [get old and] die.....: D that's what I like about your poetry, your messages are so clear and clean no matter how twisted the expressions are...very nicely done! it's got a subtle humor too! 10/10.