Not A Limerick But Fun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Not A Limerick But Fun

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A man got a thousand rupees note
While walking on highway,
He took lunch at five star hotel with gloat
Two thousand rupees his bill came,
Waiter put the bill book on table,
Man put his handkerchief inside,
In hotel's will manager opened the veil,
Inside he found handkerchief and smiled,
Then he thought to wash his face,
Thinking that money will fall from it,
But paying the handkerchief the man left,
Owner of hotel washed again face of manager,
Manager washed the face of waiter,
Waiter went to wash face of that man,
But he did not find him at all,
Together all traveled by car,
The man had gone so far,
A star from sky fell on highway,
Away the way was divided,
Then they came back turning faces,
They searched in buses and bushes,
Suddenly they found the man after four hours,
They asked to pay his bill of mill,
Man said he washed his belly under bush,
Toss was done under tree of oak,
Free man said to them paying one thousand
He had paid handkerchief of two thousand rupees,
They had washed their faces using it,
New one had become old, man denied to take,
But he paid one thousand rupees note,
Then owner of hotel put in his pocket,
This was the same note which he had lost,
He thanked the man and all giggled!

Monday, December 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: food,fun,hotel,mockery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

Beware, poets chasing limericks for fun, beware of a pointed gun, here is fun without limericks done,

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

Yeah, Right you are Sir

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2019

Yeah there is fun without limericks done// fun after fun here life becomes undone//

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2019

" A star from sky fell on highway" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 07 December 2019

A fun poem need not be compulsorily a limerick....it could be like this poem too with a great fun...thank you

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Pushpendra Patel 08 June 2020

Limerick gives us fun but other poems also can give us fun. This poem is wonderful and it has meaning of fun for the readers.

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Mj Lemon 18 April 2020

Terrific humour, Kumarmani. A great verse!

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Kesav Easwaran 18 February 2020

Funny story. Enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing 10+

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Tom Allport 03 February 2020

Ha ha nothing is ever lost it just waits to be found? ...well penned.

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Biliiard Joseph 31 January 2020

Ha, ha, ha...you have made me smiling large with your interesting notable work. This is not a Limerick but a lovely fun giving poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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