Nonflowing Veins Poem by Melissa Broomhead

Nonflowing Veins

Rating: 4.5


forever here
forever there
forever no one will care

no one understanding
no one is landing
on my heart anymore

though you may think you know me
you havent seen nothin yet
you think your there
but being here is something youll regret

i cut once
i cut twice
but two cuts just wont sufice

blood is seeping
and i am weeping
all because you werent there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana x 22 January 2007

you havent seen nothin yet i suggest that u should edit it this way, u haven't seen a thing yet your poem is amazing, brilliant 9l10....from me

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