No Where Poem by kayla tucker
No Where
there is nowhere left to run
no where to hide
i can can only hide inside my mind
im am only safe there no where to go but to where i came from......hell
yes it is true im am a demon, monster u may not believe it but i am
u may think i am good as gold but the true heart inside of me is a killers heart it eats at me when i dont do its bidding
i must to stay alive
i am weak inside there is one thing to keep me alive
i found.....HIM
he keeps me smiling and my heart in check and from going insane
he talks to me and now my heart is tame and so am i thank u my husband u have save my life
many mistakes in this poem you gotta fix but I like it I rated it 9 out 10 it shows your inner demon haha your still not darker then me haha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 10:22:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Kayla, Your poems sound okay, but, they all are about the same thing. Show a variety of emotions, when you feel different things. After reading your poems I was bored because they are repetitive. I feel the same thing when I read each one, and I want to be astounded, excited to figure out what the next poem will be about. Use variety, use imagination. Fae ♥