Hybrid Poem by kayla tucker

Hybrid

Rating: 4.2


its true u figured me out
im a hybrid, a vampire and wolf
i howl at the moon and drink blood
i dont drink alot even tho i cant seem to quench my thirst
it stings and burns for the salty yet sweet taste of blood
i cant take it any more
i must have some now
give it to me
as i drink i have no will to stop
what if i drink my lover dry
i must learn to control this
i cant hurt him
it would kill me in side
so i must learn blood is good but to much and u can hurt thee people u love
so as i calm down my thirst seems to retreat
i`ve controlled it, it no longer controls me
i am its master
i am a hybrid i have controlled my thirst
now my love are u ready to change to vampire my husband?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johannes Yeboah 15 April 2009

I'm sorry, Kayla but this ain't good.u ve the potential so don't screw up.come on! Be You.Be Different-a friend on this site always tells me this! !

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*I'm not broken. * 30 March 2009

Kayla... I really like your poems, but you know your not even really like this. Your not all about blood, be yoursself. Write poems about what YOU like, and what YOU expirience, not about what you want people to think you are. Just be yourself, I liked you before, and I like you now. But I wish you would stick to who you are, not who other people are, or what other people want you to be.

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