No Ordinary Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Ordinary



Yes queen
You had been
My future dream
And sun beam

I shall always miss
Bliss
That you offered
I am so glad

I shall always
Be near
And dear
For no fear

You are queen
But so keen
To be part
I shall always see in form of an art

You are no ordinary
But simple and visionary
I shall love to be in your kingdom
With knowledge and wisdom

I shall make no move
Until it is proved
That I am really worth
I shall always be there up to last breathe

Tuesday, September 16, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

I enjoy it.. Richard J Swartz44 minutes ago You have to know Poetry to understand it and know how to Read it...as well as to Wright it. You are a very good Poet I might add. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

Best line Todd Vanisacker59 minutes ago Love the line I shall always see in form of an art I am half tempted to steal it. Just kidding Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

It's alright Emi Leonetti1 hour ago The rhythm is nice but it honestly feels a bit clichéd.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

Yes queen You had been My future dream And sun beam

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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