No Good Poem by lilly mandrell

No Good

Rating: 2.7


Like a fly on the wall
You just sit and stare
Just watching me

Your eyes are probes
Looking into my soul
Seeing everything in me

My life pulses
At your slightest movement
Wanting to know what you see

I see into you
And see you are no good
No good for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aiden Florence 28 March 2009

It's good. There's nothing wrong with the last stanza either, flawless. The only thing I hate is the first line-it just reminds me of Miley Cyrus and....waaack =P

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Callie Carroll 28 March 2009

Nice. I especially like.'my life pulses...'

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