Smille Poem by lilly mandrell

Smille

Rating: 2.8


When I think of you I smile
But all I have of you is a pile
A pile of letters,
But its as light as a feather
When I’m sad or lonely I read my pile
and laugh, cry and smile.
Because you make me happy.
Oh my God this is sappy!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tearon Uzuki 09 December 2006

The last line makes it worthwhile, but be careful with the spelling. It's a pet peeve of mine, but I know that it bugs other people.

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Ndidi Ubogu 09 July 2006

sweet. i like this poem because of its rhyme, and i think u re doing very good in that area. also i like the conclusion and i wait to read more sweet and simple poems from you. good effort

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