hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,974 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No End - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It is black snake
Real one and not fake
It will not bite
As it had meal after great fight

Snake is lying low
And will certainly allow
Everybody without concern
The frog lost life in turn

The huger does not stop
But for time being it is stopped
The stomach is full
It was completely successful

Rich countries take snake’s lead
Try for poor countries to read
Not their intention but real motive
Help and aid not need base but selective

Gold has been cornered
So diamond business to in hand
Textiles and insurance not far away
Oil is leaking and may find way

Provide them lethal weapons
They will fight the wars to win
What will they barter for blood?
Oil to sell and obtain the food

This may go on
Snake may eat but not gone
It may coil and take it easy
Wait for new pry to make busy


Comments about No End by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 55,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Kati Arana likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 55,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 11:06:00 PM)

    Ultra Violet
    It's better that way, such a glorious thought..before I ruined it with my comment. ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 11:05:00 PM)

    Great comparison


    Javier Sanchez40 minutes ago
    you earned it
    Comment +1
    very powerful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Miranda-Leila Michele39 minutes ago
    Provide them lethal weapons
    They will fight the wars to win
    What will they barter for blood?
    Oil to sell and obtain the food

    This may go on
    Snake may eat but not gone
    It may coil and take it easy

    Wait for new pry to make busy



    ^^^^^amazing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    It is black snake
    Real one and not fake (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013


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