No Chance To Fail Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Chance To Fail

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It is hope against hope
Nothing moves contrary and flops
It is his blessings that works
The world around seems good with words

So many friends may try to seek
Your friendship and many more try to speak
Yes it is worship fir rising sun
Lots of enjoyment and fun

So long life is moving in right direction
Everything may speak of good action
Wherever you put you hand
It may eventually turn into gold

Fortune may turn evenly
You may also lead happily
But all these things may survive
If you have kept your past memory alive

It means past is never forgotten
Your poverty days are taken into account
You are behaving nicely with poor and needy
Your entire life is free from greed

Such kind of live may flourish
It may be wish of many
You may have support of all
There is no chance to fail

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

It is hope against hope Nothing moves contrary and flops

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Nice rhyming, flow Krista Greene2 minutes ago Good rhyme and flow. Clear intent. Wish there were stronger imagery or emotion attached. Keep writing! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Like 8 hours ago by Melissa Vigna to No chance to fail

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

welcome Emilia Ayuk Farasha Hanem like this. 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Rajesh Jaiswal and Farasha Hanem like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 4 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Like 3 minutes ago by Melissa Vigna | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Hopeful Delilah Smith3 minutes ago This was very well written, and I hope to read more of your work. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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