Nine Bowls of Water Poem by Robert Gray

Nine Bowls of Water

Rating: 4.3


Clear water, in silvery tin dishes
dented as ping pong balls:
a lemon juice tinge of the staling light is in them;
they've a faint lid of dust.

A potted water along a board slopped
and dripping lightly.
While the men work on the city road, excavating
its charred blackness,

the water waits
behind a corrugated iron shed that is set
at the pavement front,
under the tall shadowing empty stadium.

On that low plank, also, crude soap pieces,
bright as the fat
of gutted chickens - but, with a closer look, resistant,
darkly-cracked, like old bone handles -

one beside each bowl,
and the rags are on their bits of hooked wire.
The cars continue,
but few people walk here between the lunch shed

and brick wall. Set out along a wet bench,
the kneeling water:
this reality from which we have dreamed the spirit.
We walk in grittiness,

on papers, mud-scrapings,
splattered with a sporadic jackhammer racket,
past nine bowls of water - a gallantry of the union.
Trees in avenues and sailing boats and women.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2020

one beside each bowl, and the rags are on their bits of hooked wire. The cars continue, but few people walk here between the lunch shed..a very fine poem. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 June 2019

An intriguing poem with an unique style of narration.

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grace 09 June 2019

waht are the themes?

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Robert Gray

Robert Gray

New South Wales / Australia
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