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Night

Rating: 3.1


The canvas of black
On display each night.
Laced with fluffly clouds
Stars lending them a soft light.
The moon taking centre stage
Its crescent like a smile
A smile we humans have forgotten
and the appreciation for this black glory
that we never consider worthwhile.
Look around, be sensetised
feel the romance, get wrapped up in the aura
and take a magical flight.
I'll make you fall in love
with the nature's wonder called 'Night'
Come with me,
I am offering you an invite.

(8 May,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aisha Sherazi 12 May 2006

Thank you for inviting me, you were right, but I didn't need to look Preeti, it is all there in your use of words! You have been a busy girl! Peace and best wishes, Aisha

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Jay P. Narain 15 May 2006

A good poem. You are getting better with every poem.

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Tiara Neal 17 May 2006

I love this poem its very calm and inviting tiara

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AHHHH, VERY AMOROUS WRITE, YOUNG LASSIE....STRONG USE OF IMAGERY...CASCADING MOVEMENT LEADING TO A K.O. CLOSE..IO FRANK

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Bri Edwards 25 October 2017

very nice! when is the next flight? i suppose you have fled PH or perhaps even Earth by now! :) bri to MyPoemList

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Catastrophe King 08 August 2006

So? ... Did you actually invite? ? Did he come? ? You are a perfect artist.... I run short for the words of praises... AMAZED! !

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Muhammad Shanazar 06 August 2006

Lovely romantic poem with beautiful images; the canvas of blackness that apears at each night with changed fresh beauties of nature, wrapped in fluffy clouds... a great job, go here is my own poem On The Night read and comment. ON THE NIGHT The beauteous bride dressed in black, Whose fair forehead is adorned, With a huge round piece of gold, Glowing galaxies are fretted, In the combed lustrous dark hair. Always comes out after the sunset, Walks behind the groom of day, With modest gait, blushed shy face, Exposing what revealing light conceals, But hides the frail deeds of humanity. Muhammad Shanazar

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 29 July 2006

i love this. its so magical, so other-wordly. keep up the awsomeness! :)

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Roy Storey 26 July 2006

The night wings open as the moon shines down on a sleeping world dreaming of tomorrow which never comes. a good poem of yours Take care Roy.

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