Never-Ending Love Poem by Pranesh Patil

Never-Ending Love

Rating: 4.8


Mother O mother, thou love lasts for ever..
How could I just not be happy
When you make we wear the little pinnafore,
With flowers on it painted red and blue

I would play with the dirt and grit,
Return home in a filthy outfit
But I know you mother and the anger in your eyes....

Mother O mother, thou love lasts for ever..
How could I just not be happy
When you make me wear the white bead
necklace,
Of glowing white and dazziling beads.

I got in a tug of war with friends,
My friends pulled down the beads of the neck,
I realised the folly I did...

Mother O mother, thou love lasts for ever..
How could I just not be happy
I wish to fly in the sky high, with no limits and bounds unknown, like the bird in the sky...

I am happy in the Lord's own land,
With happiness around and inside of me,
The eternal bliss and my mind drawn inwards,
Old dirty clothes is what I need, because I know I am pure indeed.

Thursday, September 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god,kid,lord,love,mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a adapted from the version of a kannada poem written by Rishikanda(Sathyanarayana Mujumdar- Ref. book Sodarina Kadarali- ಸೊಡರಿನ ಕದಿರಲಿ) .
The poet in this context speaks of the never ending love of the Lord towards us which is infallible and infinite.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranesh Patil 14 September 2017

Thank you all for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

You are definitely happy like us in this land of LORD. Lord, our beloved eternal father acts as mother too for you and all. Her love is power for all creatures. We are happy with him or her ever. Beautiful tribute poem is shared for tribute of mother as well as for God....10

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Pranesh. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2017

Such a heartwarming read.....a big 10++++++

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