Maylee Bossy

Rookie - 87 Points (17/02/95)

Neurotic Deception - Poem by Maylee Bossy

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Dizzy skies catch drunken eyes
Then fade away to black
A single flower underneath
Falls in concrete cracks

I stumble on feet, I stumble on words
Those words at which I tremble
And though my heart bares no false witness
On lips the lies assemble

The clouds cry from a moonless sky
But who are they to judge?
For they too have deceived
And I have yet to hold a grudge

Now rain shall pour and ripple
In puddles on the street
And I shall gaze into the black
For your eyes I cannot meet


Comments about Neurotic Deception by Maylee Bossy

  • Rookie Joshua Crumpton (3/21/2012 11:26:00 AM)

    Nice job, That's a great poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Deja Rupp (1/12/2011 2:06:00 PM)

    I really really adore this poem
    Your rhyme scheme is great! And the detail is well put
    Great job!
    You defenetly have a gift (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 28, 2010


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