survi sharma


Naxals give us wounds


When you are under
your sleep, and sweet dream,
at that moment,
do you know what is
happening in some regions
of chhattisgarh, jharkhand,
west bengal, maharashtra and
madhya pradesh and others.
naxallites are on the killing spree.
they kill and we are killed.
are they eccentric, as doing so,
and i ask, people live in fears
their lives are at stake,
they are living on the tip of gun,
and all of a sudden, bomb blasts,
and we only see on television
having a cup of tea, sometimes
in newspapers, reading goes-
ten people killed in the naxallite attack,
my god, ten people! They were humans,
they were innocent, they were helpless.
the only mistake of theirs is that
they are living in one of these states.
naxals are not humans, devil they are
their demands have no value, in my eyes.
do you want to eradicate it?
as they are the slur on the face of India.
i want my india back, the perfect condition,
i wish, it may happen one day, with my eyes open.

Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    I am same as Thomas no knowledge on the subject. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Powerful poem Survi, I would like to know why they are they on a killing spree? It is so wrong what they are doing to innocent people! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,226 Points Ramesh Rai (6/21/2013 7:29:00 PM)

    I agree with Mr. Dinesh Nair.We need to change our social eqution.But after all we (the innocent people) are being victim of this evil deed.Good attempt Survi to bring back. The govt. is also taking help of gun to eradicate inatead of giving them a support to lead a peaceful life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abhinav Sharma (6/21/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    are you so sure they are wrong (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simran Arora (6/21/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    I nvr hv facd it...bt yor words made me realsd d fear....nic one...lv 2 read more of d poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pradip Dasgupta (6/20/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    i am from naxal affected area and i know the pain of people.hope they come into mainstream. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/20/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    I know nothing about Naxals so cannot make any judgement or any comment untill I do.
    Maybe you could do a series of poems explaining that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Abhishek Mishra (6/20/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    U r poetess with superb writing skill..again very nice poem on social issue. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (6/20/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    Hi Survi, I like your poem very much. (Report) Reply

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