survi sharma


Equality - Poem by survi sharma

Superior?
Is that what you think you are?
Superior! ?
because your skin is lighter?
because your hair is shorter?
because your life is better?
because your voice is deeper?
why?
I thought you knew
knew about racism
knew about sexism
knew about how it is wrong
knew how we all are the same inside
but,
since you are SUPERIOR
we have no equality to you
bow
bow to the superior
bow...


Comments about Equality by survi sharma

  • Rookie Jaya Mishra (8/25/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    Great messege nicely put.
    I liked how you presented not only one but both the discriminations prevaling in society...

    just because your hair is shorter.... Liked this one! !

    Keep going....
    Best of luck! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Kinjal Sharma (8/8/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    we all are equal
    what a great message it contains (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (8/6/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    voice ed with rage, voiced loud and clear.....boils the mind... reading too..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankit Sharma (8/3/2013 12:25:00 PM)

    nice poem
    we all are equal as has been made by the same god (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/3/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    It is very lonely in a lie. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/29/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    Good poem.Final surrender? Surrender with disgust is not equality.Any superior will bow down if wise. The right knowledge will convince ones ignorance. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/28/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    my sentiment exactly, powerful write Survi, we all are equal in the eyes of the Maker.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (7/26/2013 3:16:00 AM)

    every human being has its own guts
    powerful delievered message with a clear cut words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,744 Points Hazel Durham (7/25/2013 4:11:00 PM)

    Superior is a feeling of self importance that is so inflated until somebody sensible sticks a pin in all that hot air! !
    Equality is freedom for everybody! !
    Powerful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,744 Points Hazel Durham (7/25/2013 4:11:00 PM)

    Superior is a feeling of self importance that is so inflated until somebody sensible sticks a pin in all that hot air! !
    Equality is freedom for everybody! !
    Powerful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Shila Sinha (7/25/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    all human beings are same irrespective of their caste, creed, gender and religion, i believe. only differs in thinking. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,730 Points Ramesh Rai (7/24/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    No superiority. Anybody feeling
    superior suffers from inferiority
    complex. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/23/2013 2:04:00 PM)

    yeah, world should have equal eyes for everyone
    a great and eye opening poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 147 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/23/2013 3:12:00 AM)

    A nice write in a sarcastic way about the evil named 'Racism'.. Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/23/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    No superiority. Anybody feeling superior suffers from inferiority complex. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/22/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    I thought we were are all equal we all come in this world the same way we will all leave the same way. I think this makes us all equal. nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Vizard Dhawan (7/22/2013 3:07:00 PM)

    the question of the devil racism is quite praiseworthy over here (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013


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