Nature Poem by Mark Jonggo

Nature

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In the widest place on the universe,
There is an attractive and beautiful planet
It is so green that makes you attracted
Full of creatures- animals, humans, plants
The dancing trees that can amaze you
The water that flows in my veins
And they can see my image in the water
A natural atmosphere that may help you to live like an eight.

Nature
Saturday, January 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 23 January 2016

'There is an attractive and beautiful planet' I would like to go there, because here I fear the 'Full of creatures- animals, humans, plants' is top heavy with human biomass, meaning the more humans the less animals and plants, and the death of so much beauty

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