Narrow Poem by Jay Alexander

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You said
Let's do a canal
This summer.
We began at Stratford,
A first for me,
But you had done
Canals before, since you'd
Been a kid.
Messing on boats
At thirty felt like
Learning to ski
At twenty.
No fear you said,
I'll keep you on the straight
And narrow.
I negotiated banks,
Locks; other
Barges we passed
Within a whisper;
Disappeared
Through tunnels
Where you couldn't
Stand straight,
Cruised over viaducts,
Which seemed
To hover on air,
Any false move,
Certain death.
At stops
We had to
Squeeze-up
With other clients
In the pub.
Once, I almost
Slipped water-wards
Avoiding
A cyclist,
For you, hilarious;
That night
We made love,
I banged my head,
You laughed.

As we neared
Avonmouth,
Tasted the sea air,
Embraced the open sky,
I felt,

The wind was in my sails
at last.

Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Galina Italyanskaya 06 January 2016

It's a charming poem, so atmospheric! I like it very much!)

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