Mystery Man Poem by Princess Bernadette Anillo

Mystery Man

Rating: 4.0


There was a husky voice inside me
That kept me closing my eyes to see
He was mysterious but still so lovely
Still so kept hidden beneath my misery

He kept on crawling on my dreams
And detonating my shame and seems
As if world is pulling me back in the stream
I can't find a way to deactivate his beams

I sought towards his gentle touches
And crave for his endless lushes
The way my heart he left so smashed
And now I try to get him crashed

So still I cry for almost a wink
And the stereos of my mind decided to think
I'd never disable myself to the rink
And never let my heart get down with the sink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kurt Behle 08 June 2009

What a Perfect poem... Where did you find the words sweetheart or you are an angle Well 10+ for your marvelous skills

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Taher Al-Shemaly 08 June 2009

Nice one, but maybe the second verse needs a little bit of re-ordering. Nice job.

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Princess Bernadette Anillo

Princess Bernadette Anillo

Brgy. Ambulong, Tanauan City Batangas
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