Mysterious Dusk Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Mysterious Dusk
Dusk before lunar eclipse dreams
Becoming pink rosy to fill ink,
The tree of hope rises towards,
Welcome song is written in sky,
Love has become pen feeling is ink,
A balm of pain is painted to heal,
Linking mind with Divine eternally
Every soul writes in heart of emotion.
Mysterious dusk is dispersed in love,
Having many coloured wings to fly,
To absorb golden divine grace above,
Dusk continuously sings today glory,
After few hours lunar eclipse will be,
Silvery Moon will be covered by shadow,
Then Blood Moon will be reincarnated.
This red-pink-golden-orange veil again,
It will cover Blood Moon to motivate,
Tender hope will dazzle above in space,
Abode of celestial celebration whispers,
Divine's creation isfull of mysteries,
Magical dusk is painted by clouds and joy,
Green scene of mind wants to quench thirst
By drinking nectar of wisdom of God more,
This dusk has brought up an invitation,
To watch Blood Moon as bride in marriage,
Tonight will be special that rosy dusk says.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,31 July 2018. All rights reserved.
There is a kind of calmness in your poems. This one is among your top ones.
Lovely lovely phrasing to celebrate God's universe and its ways. Mysterious Dusk captured the feelings that eclipses engender in us! Well done, my friend, very well done! 10++++
A keen observation of nature's beauty and wonders linking God's mysteries has been made into a magnificent poem. Beautifully crafted with superb imagery. I concur to the comments of Father Kostas. A profound piece of work worthy of 10++++
Amazing portrayal of a full moon night witnessing a lunar eclipse, coming out of it and presenting a surreal scene from earth to sky with resplendent colours and shades.. Thanks for this wonderful treat.
" Welcome song is written in the sky" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Beautiful description of dusk, that special mysterious part of evening just before darkness. Great word choice, vivid colors and expressions permeate your poem, like a colorful abstract viewed through the eyes of God and man.. Absolutely Wonderful write!
Yes indeed, magical dusk is painted by clouds and joy.....Lovely imagery. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani......10.
Such a rosy colored poem, it has some beautiful theme, your language of narrating... Soft n calm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A magnificent piece of work! Thanks for sharing.............10