(01-24-1990 / San Antonio, Texas)

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my world

My Beautiful World is kind
My Beautiful World is sweet
My Beautiful World is nice
My Beautiful World is generous
My Beautiful World is selfless

My Beautiful World has given me everything i need, and then some
I love My Beautiful World, and My Beautiful World loves me

I am the only one on My Beautiful World
But i am not lonely, not in the least bit
My Beautiful World and I have each other

But...there is a problem

My Beautiful World is tired
My Beautiful World is sore
My Beautiful world has wounds and scars

Some will never heal

I do everything i can to help

My Beautiful World wants to explode
and the thing is...

I'm still on My Beautiful World
So if she explodes, I explode with her

It would be an honor to go like that...

But that is not how i want it to end
I want to be on My Beautiful World forever

If you haven't figured it out yet
My Beautiful world isn't a world at all

She is a very special person...

who happens to mean the world to me.

Submitted: Friday, May 07, 2010

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  • Rebecca Bell (10/19/2010 3:08:00 PM)

    This is so cute! The ending is the best! Great write!

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (5/7/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    awwss! ! ! thats beautiful! ! !
    whoever she is shes lucky to have u! ! !

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