My Vaporized Tears Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

My Vaporized Tears



My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy
It is shedding raindrops on the thirsty land
My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds
It is shaking the branches of the mango trees
My unfulfilled wishes have become waves of the sea
It is roaring like a lion to frighten the pirates
My old days have become colorful butterflies
They are roaming in my home's backyard
My some lost hopes have become a flock of cranes
They are coming back to their natural habitat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bolah Lawal 17 October 2012

I love this piece....bravo!

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Sanjay Mehta 17 October 2012

You have beautifully expressed the great, great potential of human beings. In general this potential is always with us all which is kept in latent stage, it is an pity, you will agree with me. Very musical, the imagery used is supberb. Thanks for sharing.

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Free Bird 18 October 2012

i am agree with sanjay Mehta. its raelly nice :)

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Scotty Dogg 18 October 2012

Very good. Beautiful!

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Aung Si 19 October 2012

My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds My unfulfilled wishes have become waves of the sea My old days have become colorful butterflies My some lost hopes have become a flock of cranes Wonderful idea! Your ink flowing is quite interesting.Well done! ! !

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 October 2012

Love this job... Thank you for sharing

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Caroline Bulleck 18 October 2012

I love your poem. It has excellent wording, flow, personification and imagery.

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Darkangel Flyfree 18 October 2012

A very wonderful poem! Loved it, Thanks!

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So Close 18 October 2012

really fantastic...great thought and thanks to invite me to read it... »so close«

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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