My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy
It is shedding raindrops on the thirsty land
My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds
It is shaking the branches of the mango trees
My unfulfilled wishes have become waves of the sea
It is roaring like a lion to frighten the pirates
My old days have become colorful butterflies
They are roaming in my home's backyard
My some lost hopes have become a flock of cranes
They are coming back to their natural habitat
You have beautifully expressed the great, great potential of human beings. In general this potential is always with us all which is kept in latent stage, it is an pity, you will agree with me. Very musical, the imagery used is supberb. Thanks for sharing.
My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds My unfulfilled wishes have become waves of the sea My old days have become colorful butterflies My some lost hopes have become a flock of cranes Wonderful idea! Your ink flowing is quite interesting.Well done! ! !
I love your poem. It has excellent wording, flow, personification and imagery.
really fantastic...great thought and thanks to invite me to read it... »so close«
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this piece....bravo!