My Sister Poem by Teenu Thomas Thaliath

My Sister

Rating: 5.0


From the womb of my mother I fell
To a spread plane of white cloak
Covered with blood and its smell
I smiled as innocently as one of the flock.

In that crowded place
Hovered with dim light
I found an angel like face
Shining like a star so bright.

Time passed by
We fought for more ice-creams
She still sang lullaby for me but why?
And together we mended our dreams.

On other wedding days
While other siblings cry
Due to the power of separation rays
I teased them without knowing why.

Later on her wedding day
Though I don’t easily cry
I tried hard in the best way
But I couldn’t stop a tear roll by.

She walked past me
With the man she loves
To a place I cannot see
They flew away like doves.

Seasons changed
Time changed
Life changed
I too changed.

She is sweet, smart and bright
She cheers me up when in sadness I pass
She taught me of the Godly light
Oh! Can anyone be better than this lass?

I longed to hear her voice
I longed to see her
As alone, I cannot make noise
I couldn’t define my love for her.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Teenu. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Neetha Sasidharan 25 March 2013

grt.........hats of..kp going......... nice rhymes too.....

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Joe Aja 23 August 2012

Great work teenu, please continue to post more poems.

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Thomas Kollamparambil 01 July 2011

vrey nice and touching one. You keep tis tempo u have a vast expandddddd to fly.stop not till the goal is reached.Awake arise and go ahead.

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