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My Poem



i walk into the bathroom,
your lieing on the floor
i know what you did
and i know why you did it.

a tear runs down my face,
as i read your note
you say goodbye,
because you can live no longer.

i held your lifeless body in my arms,
i wonder why it took you so long
to say goodbye.
and why i was the only one you said it to.

was i the only one who cared?
was i the only one who wanted you?
was i the only one who needed you?

i remember the promise,
the promise we made,
i lay her lifeless body on the floor
and pick up the blade that took her from me.

i lay next to my best friend
i say goodbye to everyone
i love and care about.

the blade is ran down my wrist,
i slit both to make
sure i keep my promise,
the life i never wanted is finally
coming to it's end.

its gone its over,
i got what i wanted,
i got what i needed
my blood is mixed with my only friends.
then i die! !
then im dead! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joya Feghaly 11 April 2009

wawwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is so amazing! ! ! ! i love it! ! ~BrOkEn~~HeArT~

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Bootiful Kid 24 June 2008

wow, you're friend in this poem is lucky to have a good friend that keeps promises! but we'll be friends for life! !

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Malini Kadir 24 June 2008

Thoughts are driven my inner longing for recognition......you need to find a job in entertaining, in media......perhaps.your abilities with poetic touch and flair for drama... will draw a real crowd! All the best

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Wandering Scarlet 22 June 2008

its so sad and joyful and tragic at the same time...great ideas

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