My Place In Time Poem by Job Laz

My Place In Time



Within the rocky pattern
Of her breast I was made
And like a legend’s emblem I became,
Trailing into the days fleeting like cars,

By the edge of her elbow
I got the spot
Amidst the dancing light
That floors the aging wall like dew,

With the jest of her gallantry journal
I was fed to outdo odds,
As I journey into the open fields
With exuberance like a child,
Against time I found my feet
And with the love in her whip
My daring will to sail the heaven
Surfaced like a along awaited sunshine,

Catapulting me to cruelty
Of truant lost to self
Underneath the weight of pride
Which now pilots their sigh?

For as I am seen
Their dire sparks back to life
Their sour puke of rivalry
Aviates the orbs like a fog,

Yet my bent back rises not
To host their peevishness,
Their cruel anarchy unify to my fall,
For with mastery in was made to outshine wags.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 14 July 2011

Another brilliant poem JL! I was wondering about the question marks in the last piece I read and find myself wondering again in this poem? The line preceeding the? does not feel like a question, but I suspect it could do Which now pilots their sigh? Mmmmmm food for deep thought. It seems that 'she', be her 'Mother Nature, or mother by nature, has done a good job in giving you the tools to stand firmly in your place in time. Smiling at you Tai

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