My Pillow Poem by sakalabaktula sairaj

My Pillow



My pillow
When I was so small it was with me,
My mom gave it as my a friend,
I though as it is my bed
I was sleeping on it,
When I was growing up it was becoming so small,
At last it became up to my size of my head.

It became a bed for my head,
That time my mom said me that it is your pillow of my bed.

When my father brought a new bed for my room
I cried and fight for my old pillow

I don't know why I was crazy not able to leave it,
When my first girl friend rejected me
i cried on my pillow it got wet.

It was taking all my tears
I was feeling light by when it hear.

When my father was slapped me for getting less marks in examination
i am so sorry my pillow on you i discharged my frustration.

On my every birth day it was my first wisher,
It was with me when I was meet an accident in our school,

Only my pillow knew, all the region behind every tear of my eyes,
I am doing all my work and all my study and report this guy.

it was not only a pillow also a good and my only friend of me.
it never let me alone, it always with me


I love my pillow.

Tuesday, October 17, 2017
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it all about my pillow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rupert Hentzau 31 October 2017

I think you would be better off writing prose. Obviously the language is unfamiliar to you. Poemhunter has become a garbage bin, where all sorts of bad poetry festers. You need to write in prose. Most of your 'poem' is nothing but prose, and it is full of repetition. I am shocked that this Ramachandran does not know how to review poetry. He is only trying to flatter you and deceive you. Write in your native tongue. Write prose. Give up poetry altogether. You will live a happier and more healthy life!

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 02 November 2017

actually it was some editing problem sir i never meant to make it prose.. now see it sir and plz comment how is it

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Anand Ramachandran 20 October 2017

its seriously superb.. the meaning and the words describing how much the pillow means is really wonderfull bro

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 20 October 2017

thank you for reading and also read some of my poems if you can read plz do not forget to read the My Mother poems and also mother's day poems plz..

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