My Parrot Peepy Poem by DEEPIKA GANESH

My Parrot Peepy

Rating: 4.5


I have a new pet parrot,
That eats green chillies and carrots.
She has a big, fat, red beak,
That is always found when she peeps.
Like a cat she has green eyes,
That could look for miles.
She has a wicked smile on her face,
That shocks everyone in place!
Whatever I say, she repeats,
When I sing, the rhythm and beats.
In personal things she is always sneaky,
That is why I named her PEEPY
One time she came to school with me!
I would love to tell you the story,
But what can I do, what can I say,
Peepy is imaginary

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2015

Whatever I say, she repeats, When I sing, the rhythm and beats. Although it is an imaginative write, there is so much of longing and love in this poem. you are so young. write my young poetess. you will be a great poetess known in the world. wish you all luck. tony

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Nice inductive ending whice always adds to keeping suspense. Keep writing.

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