My Pain 02 Poem by Sheikh Shadi Marjan

My Pain 02

Rating: 5.0


I got wet in the rain
And cried loudly
who can cry more?

I heard violin tunes
And cried silently
who can cry more?

I also cried with flute
who can cry more?

Their tears are trivial than me!

Saturday, July 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

This is an emotionally intense poem, written and recited wholeheartedly!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2018

Wet in the rain! ! ! ! But hope still lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing.

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Naila Rais 29 July 2018

Oh! So wonderful poetry..... Deep in thoughts 💭...... Thnx for sharing.... Naila

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 July 2018

O Rain please come pacify my tears and vein................ /// nice writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2018

A poignant write. A vivid depiction of pain. Well crafted piece of work.10

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