My Moon My Abuser Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Moon My Abuser

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Oh! Moon dear moon every night you abused me,
Let me tell you, with your love, thirty times you amused me.
Thousands of nights I remained your beloved,
Nothing in me was remained untouched,
Your cool white light and your charming face,
Induced your love, your beauty and your grace,
Since my early childhood you made me amorous,
You made my soul pneumatic and porous
You got in my soul you entered my heart,
My feelings and my thoughts are merely your art.
Your lessons of love I applied in my life.
I returned all that to my lovely wife.

Your phases told me how time is passed,
How death is embraced, how life out classed,
We rise like a crescent and die in dark,
The full moon nights with flowers in a park,
During these thirty days your ups your downs,
Sometimes pocket less sometimes full of crowns.
The abuses of love are better than uses,
The uses of hate are worse than abuses,
I am happy Oh! Moon being abused by you,
A lot of thanks, being amused by you.
I flown with you many colorful kites,
I returned all that in my humble writes.

Wednesday, July 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Even in palmistry and astrology moon is symbol of love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kirti Sharma 16 July 2014

a beautiful poem on moon.... i like the rhyming! ! :)

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Savita Tyagi 16 July 2014

I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes. You have so many beautiful lines besides this one. The whole poem is such a pleasant read. The rhythm and rhyme so smooth. Thanks for sharing.

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Bisma Mirza 16 July 2014

i lOve moon.... This poem is great and enough to describe the beauty of Moon [3 beautiful poem

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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 23 July 2014

Another beautiful poem sir! Many congratulations for the rank of popular member, mashaALLAH! You; ve motivated me :)

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Valsa George 22 July 2014

Moon with her varying shapes and moods has ever enticed poets and lovers equally.... How many verses have been so far written on moon and how many lovers have met under a moon lit sky! ! Your poem glows like a moon Akhtarji!

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Salini Nair 20 July 2014

We rise like a crescent and die in dark, ......beautiful lines sir.....................

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Neela Nath Das 20 July 2014

Cool write! Moon is my favorite theme of write. .A lot of thanks, being amused by you. I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes- - - - - - - lovely lines.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

Wow. Beautiful words.... I flown with you many colorful kites, I returned all that in my humble writes.....Pleasant to read. Very true said even in palmistry and astrology moon is symbol of love. I agree with you. Loved the beautiful imagery you created with beautiful moon changing its beautiful phases each days....Loved reading it.

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