My Life Without U Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

My Life Without U

Rating: 4.5


My life without u
Like
Pool without water
Garden without flowers
Sky without moon or stars
Sea without wave
Food without test
Child without smile
My life without u is
Empty Empty Empty...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Sai R 18 July 2009

i can c a visible void!

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Marvin Brato 05 November 2008

Very descriptive feeling that can not thrive in the absence of a loved one! High marks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2008

A very nice piece of work which touches the hearts of many.Thanks and keep on writing for us to read. Bye. Edward Kofi Louis

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