My King Among Men Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

My King Among Men

Rating: 5.0


You walk somewhere in the shadows,
You're with me in dreams at night,
You float in the air like a leaf on a breeze,
I'm holding your memory tight.

A longing to see you this moment,
Of hearing your voice once again,
You were my wonderful friend you know,
My Dad,
My king among men.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 28 August 2022

An incredibly loving tribute to a father that you had very deeply loved.

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Michael Cochrane 28 August 2022

Very beautiful

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

Thank you so much Michael. Much appreciated x

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

This oh so beautiful poem makes me very sad, since my dearest Dad died at such a very young age and he was so very talented, but your poem is an amazing Beauty, Jayne! 5 Stars TOP Score

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

So glad you liked it Sylvia x Thank you for your kind comments x

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Terry Searcy 27 August 2022

Beautifully written

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

Thank you Terry. I appreciate your comment.

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