My Immortal Poem by Min Sia

My Immortal

Rating: 5.0


Watch me until morning
Brace me upon you
Hold me dear tightly
Touch me deeply

Let me dwell within you
Don't let me lost in you
Feel the air that you breath
The same air that I need

Jail me in your dreams
Lock me in your heart
Keep me in your memory
My sweetest, My immortal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 07 November 2008

Just about only Krazy Glue left

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Naru Kaede 08 November 2008

Huks... I wondering when I can get love like that... Someone hold me tight, and feel me there... huks... I love it, it's so lovely...

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Moushumi moushumi 16 November 2008

Recollecting my younger, innocent memories of my twenties by reading your poems. great writing with strongest feeling.10***

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 November 2008

Hey Min, Powerful/significant imgination/desires penned with much zeal 10++ has been given to u

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 13 November 2008

Beautiful poem. Loved the feel to it. Keep writing.

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Ency Bearis 09 November 2008

splendid love offering...nice write and enchanting...10 Ency Bearis

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Anjali Sinha 09 November 2008

wow so sweet chain-- me lock me- fasten me--- surely a 10++from me love anju

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