I Love You Poem by Min Sia

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


I love you..there's no reason
As the sky kissed the land
As the sun and moon held each hand
As the bee disposed his honey
As the sea immobilized by fear
You held me in your arms
Until blood runs out of time
You kissed me so that my lips gone burnt
You dressed me that my soul opened windows
You fed me that my stomach released poison
You bathed me with an acid
With your palms of fangs of death
Your embrace like silver
The heat of cold river
Swing me high and low
Rope at my neck and below
You laid me in your bed
Below 6feet bended

I love you...
And all I can think of...
To have you kidnapped
Drag to a place of nobody
Kiss you with lips full of honey
Dress you like golden prince
Feed you with chocolates and candies
Bathe you with herbs and scents
Lay you upon my bed of roses
Embrace you with the stars committed

I've given you all my material world
You've opened my gate to the other world
To feed this hunger burning inside me
Yet, I give you light for you to seek
Your hands and feet will be shed with blood
Metals and flesh intertwined
Stalactite and stalagmite all around
Trapping sins and echoes outside
Holding your head with mine
As the Earth takes its time

For I love you truly
You and me, forever be...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazem Al Jaber 13 November 2008

words are clearly showed the love which you hide and keep inside your heart for whom you love.. its a pretty amazing.. keep up a good write.. thx for sharing.. hazem

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Ency Bearis 13 November 2008

enchanting poem..eloquent verses of love well narrated..lovely..A10 Ency Bearis

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Nia Riz 13 November 2008

beauitiful...m rating it 10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 13 November 2008

WOW - has a lot of passion

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Mine Yours 14 November 2008

! ! ! ! ! ! very spirited and strong minded

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Kiss you with lips full of honey Rachel Ann Butler

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premji premji 13 March 2009

dear min, you prove: love means sacrifice!

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Pink Butterfly ... 15 January 2009

Lovely to read! Very romantic....

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Little Morning Star 04 January 2009

love poems are always impressed me, so is this poem.. really nice work..

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Naru Kaede 06 December 2008

Wowwww, , , so dark... I would rather put Wikan in the jail for my revenge... And make him suffer with hanging him in the wall... (So mean) But this is truly a beautiful revenge... ellegance I mean... Because you revenge it in to a word... beautiful word... I love ittt...! ! ! It's already in my poemlist!

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