Autobiography Poem by Min Sia

thought provoking......well done

Ok Min! on the merits of my first read of your work, I'd say this is a good start, I enjoyed it and thyme scheme seems to flow well. Keep on writing, the only query I have is that your bio states female? the second line is a beauty too, deadliest futures are us! smiling at you, TAi

that last line is fantastic....keep life in those lines and let them flow...great work

Chained by reality with consequences and vain Enthralled memories haunting through.................... .......................................................................... Though deadliest future beholds this limited thee wonderful imagery by the life, yet most powerful voice that enthrals all, a ingenious glow of unique genre, wellpenned,10++, thanks for sharing

An excellent write. I am glad I fell upon your works. I will be reading many more

N i c e and t o u c h y...

cool one my dear you have come a long way- and u still have miles and miles to go before you. So keep head straight and chin up take gods name and DO IT WHATEVER --10 regards anjali

You have opened your heart here and although your life has been hard so far you are still young, keep positive and keep writing, 10 Lynda xx

Such a sad memories, , , Don't give up, okay, still many people love you and your poem, , , They want to read you more write, , They want to see you walk forward, , And I'm still here even just a distance, , Hehehe, , this is the lovely one! very cool! Naru Kaede, ,

Hello poet friend Min and thank you for sharing a part of your soul and life's journey. Life is filled with difficulties and trials, however, being alive, we can appreciate the fact that we are able to look upon them and learn. Great read, Loyd