My Illusive Dream Poem by Heather Burns

My Illusive Dream

Rating: 4.2


hold me captive
refusing to
surrender.

They continue a
haunting refrain
as I linger in
their presence.

In my imagination
you are ever
present
encouraging,
caressing,
comforting me.

Like my constant
shadow
ever walking beside
me
hovering over my
image.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 16 July 2013

Cool, your dreams are real, as well AS YOUR shadow, but God is always there and above you. in your dream you are but an Image. hum, accurate.

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Danny Draper 15 July 2013

Dreams may be elusive, but they inspire and goad us on to goals and love. Well said.

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Sj Holland 15 July 2013

I like the 3rd stanza and how you described the comfort of a remembered, or imaginary dream.

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