My Girl Poem by Amber AandB

My Girl

Rating: 5.0


you were my first true love.
i thought about you everyday, untill the day they took you away
you were there a month
i was so scared
i couldnt eat lunch
knowing you were there
you came back
i was so happy, but i still couldnt relax
i wanted to help, you said you could handle it
you said don't worry i'll be just fine
i said i know but you'll always be mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Rak 14 June 2012

Amber, I really REALLY like this one, it feels to have quite a bit of heart in it. Good job! Keep writing!

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Tiffany M... 27 August 2011

Awwwwwwwwwwwwh, that's, yet again, really cute and sweet! ! ! ! ! : 'D Really meaningful

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