My Fish Died Poem by Anne Yun

My Fish Died

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Love committed a suicide in his leap
his destiny of despair i dare not deem
Winds are still blowing clouds' dream
and i killed his love as it might seem

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Sriranji Aratisankar 06 September 2016

Love committed a suicide in his leap wonderful introductory line....

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2016

Mourning! Life and death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 22 July 2016

A brilliant metaphoric expression. Excellent write.X

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Anne Yun 22 July 2016

Thank you, sir.

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Cigeng Zhang 22 July 2016

Brilliant, Anne. Love committed a suicide in his leap. I really liked this line.

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Anne Yun 22 July 2016

So happy that you like this line :)

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