My Eyes Close By Themselves Poem by Joen Coronel

My Eyes Close By Themselves

Rating: 4.5


In just a blink

you sink

.

In just a flip

you sleep

.
In just a finger snap

you swap

.

Just in time my eyes close

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You
Sink in the deep blue

Sleep in a white hue

Swap your soul from a mild dew to a mindless clue.

.

You are the lightest cotton ever lived

The flame shining fieriest, so naive

Still, you can’t be lit

Your candle is melted and split.

.

Are these true?

Are they real?

Are they new?

Are these surreal?

.

It’s drilling in my head

The pain, the memories

It’s quaking under my bed

The past, the miseries

It’s boring in my skin

The thoughts, the regrets

It’s dripping down my chin

The tears, the threats

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Those are just walls

When I’m stone-walling

Those are just imageries

When I’m imagining

Not even knowing

That nightmares are dreams too

~

Until I close my eyes

And my tears drip, then

Sink

Sleep

Swap

~

This time, my eyes close by themselves.

Wednesday, April 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about the boy who wishes that in only a blink of an eye, he could forget those bad memoirs of his past love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 April 2015

Nice and well articulated piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Joen Coronel 30 April 2015

Tnx mate! I will read yours

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Rutvi Padhy 29 April 2015

Beautiful poem.... *_*

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Joen Coronel 30 April 2015

Thanks. Highly appreciated remark

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Kelly Kurt 29 April 2015

Nicely written, Joen. Sometimes that boy is me. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Joen Coronel 30 April 2015

haha. We shared the same sentiments lol. Thanks!

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