My Eternal Wish Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

My Eternal Wish

Rating: 4.3


I wish i could cry once more.
Hiding my tears
Will not bring any peace.
A peace needed for living,
A peace needed to cherish my lost life.


Those tears are lost,
Lost forever,
Which once helped my innermost self.
I wish i could cry once more.


Tears plead their wayout
I being my culprit,
Stop their flow. So,
why i wish to cry once more?


May be this world has made,
Myself too a sterner stuff.
Like the usual trends this world follows,
Myself too follows the same.
But still i wish to cry once more.


Emptiness and solace this world embodies,
Is hereby hidden deep inside me.


My expressions may not satisfy thy will,
Crying once more
And
This time for my ownself
Is my soul's eternal wish.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Trivedi 28 January 2011

Such a deep emotion..... Again a master piece... i loved it..... a wish to cry once more..... it's very deep n intense.... keep it up..........

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Wendy Bureau 25 March 2009

'I being my culprit'.. We are captors of our own destined wills.. to shed but a tear once more.. to find peace within... I enjoyed the idea behind this.. Nicely done Wendy

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Vaibhav Pandey 25 March 2009

a good expessive write my friend...I liked it...10

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Amber Vasquez 24 March 2009

I loved how you expressed the words in this poem.

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