My Cryptic Love Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

My Cryptic Love

Rating: 4.8


I fell in love
A kind never heard before.
I fell in love
A kind unsaid yet.

Darkness was my love
And i fell in love.
Shadows when created
Defy the truth.
My 'other' part 'emerging'
Felt only by
'My darkness.'
I had no choice
But,
To fall in love.

All my tears remain hidden
In darkness alone.
Nobody sees them
No hand has so much power
So as to wipe them.
But,
My companion
'My darkness'
Hides them all.

Myself being conquered
Went away from
The light of thy truth.
Darkness took over
And promised a
Never ending 'love.'
And so i fell in love.

Myself was always
Incomplete
Thy presence did
'My darkness' complete.
And so,
My love for life
Did 'thy' darkness complete.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 25 May 2009

Your secret love is well expressed in poetic language here and the mystery of the verse comes over to the reader as very interesting......10 from Fay.

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Supriya Prathapan 25 May 2009

Yeah at times when you feel depressed and do not want to share your feelings with anyone, 'darkness' does appear to be a companion, a silent listener. Very well written.10++

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 26 May 2009

Very strongly writen

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Akram Awadat 26 May 2009

lovely poem, well done thanks for sharing

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premji premji 27 May 2009

i like to walk in rain rain...none can see my tears - charlie chaplin.... without darkness, what is the importance of light? they compliment............

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Thy presence did 'My darkness' complete. And so, My love for life Did 'thy' darkness complete. What an unusual way of thinking...10 for that...Brishti Mazumdar

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