My Beach Wish Poem by Aisha Alansari

My Beach Wish

Rating: 5.0


Fresh air,
Wind...
blowing my hair,
the water moves front and back,
Just want to walk in it..
want to see the sky right above me,
sun too hot..
have to wear something about my knees,
running, laughing with my family and friends,
hoping this day will never end,
I just wish I could go to the beach

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I've never been to the beach: (and I really want to and that's how I feel it would be
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 11 September 2012

NICE POEM AND IMAGES AISHA

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Golamkibria Biswas 03 September 2012

I am very happy to read and feel a lot of joy in myself.THANKS

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 30 August 2012

yeah, beach is grateful, it's good for poetry, the sun isn't always hot, but if the weather wasn't cloudy, yeah, it would be hot. we should be as depth as the deep seas to be so wise. nice poem.

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