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I thought
To disclose some of lines
Of your letters
Before somebody
But, I couldn't.

I thought
I should float these
In a sealed box
In Indian ocean
But, I couldn't.

Friday, August 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: letters,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 19 January 2019

To disclose! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 02 September 2017

I thought To disclose some lines Of your letters Before somebody But, I couldn't. I thought I should float these In a sealed box In Indian ocean But, I couldn't. - - - - - - - - - - -An amazing expression of a lovelorn heart, the secrets you could neither tell before someone nor you could forget your love. Thank you for sharing the lines- - -

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Bichitra Anand 08 October 2017

Your comments keep much value to me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

I thought To disclose some lines Of your letters Before somebody But, I couldn't.... you couldn't cause there is deep love in your heart towards her. Wonderful imaginary poem shared nicely. Thanks for sharing.

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Bichitra Anand 28 August 2017

I feel rewarded for your comments.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Bichitra. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 31 August 2017

I have read it.Marvellous.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

I think I shall float it In a sealed box In Indian ocean But, I can't. The same problem that Kunti faced in the epic Mahabharat. But she succumbed to the later and floated her secret in the River Ganga. Thanks for the poem.10.

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Bichitra Anand 25 August 2017

I wonder to see your comparison, your expression of feelings.Thanks for your comments.

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