Mutiny Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Mutiny
Is there any other time to come
Hostility of the sun is at its climax
Is there any other time to fall
Submission of earth before the vertex!
So low is the earth so high are the skies
I can fly but my wings handicapped of a limit
You are constraining me for a mutiny
I know I can't challenge your writ!
Hot blows of air no clouds no rains
Mid of October, is it autumn?
Feel! Feel sweetheart, feel my pains,
Sand in sun and a fish known as human!
Leave the throne step on the Milky ways
In the ocean of nothingness there's a beacon
Cold and milky, it's light, though your light
Like a kind mother, for love an icon,
It will guide your ship to the boiling bay
It's we who rise as clouds and fall as rains
Fall on the sand and on the burning clay
Or be prepared for a mutiny of deadly pains.
It will guide your ship to the boiling bay It's we who rise as clouds and fall as rains Fall on the sand and on the burning clay Or be prepared for a mutiny of deadly pains. do nt mutiny u alone here comment on me of course KM JI is known for his generosity u have stopped visitig me JAJI Naraaaz toe naheen
A wonderful imaginative write on nature. Powerful and thought provoking write.10++++
writ: a form of written command in the name of a court or other legal authority ok. stanza 4: it's or its? i don't know. Kelly K. is probably more 'intelligent' and 'scientific' than i am, and has more understanding of the poem. alas, i am a bit lost, though i like the sound and flow of it. what/who is mutinying? fish? ? bri ;)
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5/6/2024 10:21:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
interesting poem /// nice