Mother Poem by Miethi Goswami

Mother

Rating: 5.0


Safe and sound,
Inside you.
Many people were around me,
But, none like you.

You were in discomfort,
You couldn't toss or turn,
I couldn't help but only learn.

You took utmost care of me,
To not let me down,
Even inside you I swam,
And, I never got drowned.

Carried me for months,
With all the pain;
Brought me to this world,
With energy all drained.

From a tiny cell to a woman I am today,
You moulded me to the best,
Treated me like a Fay.

A lifetime would be less,
To thank you enough,
For your benevolent presence,
In today's world so rough.

All your life you lived for your daughters,
While bringing us up,
you never faltered.

I wish I have sipped in,
Your motherly trait so true,
So that, someday, my children recount,
'I see a reflection of granny in you'.

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 17 June 2016

Beautiful illustration.... Well defined... A Mother. Nicely penned..thumbs up..

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 May 2016

Your poem is a glorious respect towards mother.......the immeasurable love of mother depicted in your lively verses......full 10 points to you...

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 May 2016

What a fantastic poem you have composed about 'mother'....well-deserved 10 marks to you...

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Kelly Kurt 08 May 2016

Nicely stated, Miethi. My mother died 40 years ago. I wish I could say these words to her

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