Most Poem by Nika McGuin

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Rating: 5.0


We were married once,
you and I
for many years

In the beginning,
I remember I sought you out
but I didn't let you know
just how much I liked you
instead, I let you woo me
I let you do the chasing

After a time,
You had pursued me so well
I became convinced
that you loved me
more than I loved you

Now we are no more
you and I,
and I watch as you
swiftly move on
off to your next target

Shocked, I finally realize
it was I, who loved you
most after all

Friday, September 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,divorce,love,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Summary: This poem is about one of those situations in which one person seems more lovey-dovey in a relationship than the other. So that person begins to think that maybe they dont love their partner as much as they are loved by their partner. But then, they break up and that partner quickly moves on to their next prey - or they never truly stopped hunting to begin with. It is then that the person realizes, they loved their partner more and more sincerely than that person ever loved them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 09 September 2016

I agree with Tom's opening statement: A SAD REALITY OF LIFE. Eventually the speaker of your poem knows the Truth but it is a bitter awareness she gains, not even bitter-sweet, just bitter. The man swiftly moves on, his emotions are too self-centered to feel regret or remorse. But the speaker will be acutely aware of the time she wasted on him, and the wound he caused will complicate her next amorous moves. There is an injustice here but no judge to rule on it, no compensation forthcoming. She will need a strong faith to recover, especially in herself.

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Tom Billsborough 08 September 2016

A sad reality of life so well expressed. Often happens when it is too late. I wonder if love can ever be truly equal. If so, it would be magical indeed.

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Kim Barney 05 September 2016

A sad poem, but reflecting life how it is sometimes. I hope you have recovered emotionally and can move on. Best wishes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2016

Love and pain! However, hope lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing.

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