Mortality Poem by Amitava Sur

Mortality

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Mortality
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Mortal is this human life
Just an one act play
Ends up even before
Sometimes starting even.

Still we fight we desire
We do hate we conquer,
For whom and what for -
Stupid we don't know that even.
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Amitava (26.6.2014)

Thursday, June 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mortality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 26 June 2014

Yes mortal lives are very temporary, yet we live with all our emotions and feelings even though not always knowing for whom or what for. No one can ever truly know. Great poem, Amitava. Right to the point! ! Love it. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 26 June 2014

Yes, our mortal lives are very temporary, yet we live with all our feelings and emotions not really knowing for whom or what for. So true and to the point. Eternal questiongs of life always being asked. Great poem. Love it, Amitava! RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 26 June 2014

Yes, our mortal lives are very temporary, yet we live with all our feelings and emotions not really knowing for whom or what for. No one can ever truly know, they are the eternal questions always being asked in life. Great poem, Amaitava. Love it. Right to the point! ! RoseAnn

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Valsa George 26 June 2014

Our life on Earth is as fleeting as a bubble... Still we run a rat race to hoard riches and possessions. We don't know the time and hour when we will be called to leave behind all that we earned... A nice topic to brood over!

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* Sunprincess * 09 July 2014

...............truly if we look at the big picture....we are like the mist rising after the summer's rain....here ever so briefly.....then we are gone....love how you wrote this poem...

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 June 2014

Life is mortal. Me must keep moral values while we live. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 June 2014

Short and meaningful write. Very true said, we do not know the answers....what for and whom for. We conquer what we desire and a time comes we hate what we desired...Many things changes with the time. Nothing is constant....Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing these beautiful verses.

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Srabanti Guha 27 June 2014

WOw' what a message this short poem carries and gives us so nicely, it's an amazing one.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014

Our life is a prey of death. The life after death is definite but its form? Everyone has his own thinking.

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