Monochrome Moments Poem by Fiona Davidson

Monochrome Moments



A dropp of rain falls on her face
As she stands upon the shore
Wild wind tangles in her hair
As the storm breaks over her
Lightening spreads its fingers
Down towards the waves
Crackling with its power
Face seen in profile now
Whipped by the driving rain
Shoulders hunched up high
Hands held out to catch
The tears that heaven cries
Monochrome glimpses of a life
Lived out there with nature
And held tight in that moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 22 August 2009

Fabulous....just fabulous writing....what more can I say! ! ! Sue x

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2009

This has to be one of your best Fi... - - it could well be the start of a short story - - full of impassioned imagery..... great little piece..... Fay

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

fantastic fi extremly beautiful going into my favs

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 August 2009

The power and electricity of x-treme imagery...Priceless....Vey nicely done, mon ami! FjR

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