Monarch Poem by Frank Avon

Monarch

Rating: 4.5


What I see
are the leaves
of a butterfly weed

growing near the street,
sprouting regal
blossoms,

crimson and yellow,
and sprightly sprigs
with red buds

in its upper reaches.
And nestled among
those sprigs,

completely at ease,
like a fetus
in its mother's womb

or a puppy
curled up
in its bed,

or any one of us
asleep, resting our backs
by flexing our knees,

it lies,
the larva,
black and gold and white striped.

One has to wonder,
doesn't one?
if he may not be dreaming

of the epic flight
on which he will embark
in his season,

in his rugged beauty,
seeking another Eden,
the most notable

of Lepidoptera.
the triumphant

Monarch.

Sunday, October 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 October 2014

Simply a wonderful poem, Frank! Your three-line stanza is used expertly to provide fleet movement reflective of butterfly flight. In fact, movement is an outstanding aspect of this poem. From the very first to last lines the poem moves with a swift but not rushed speed and sustains that same speed throughout, which is a marvelous control of line throughout. And your imagery spills over the page with gorgeous detail. It fulfills the the poem's need to somehow duplicate the creatures' movement and colors in words. You found both and launched the migration! This is the second Monarch Migration poem I've read this week.

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