Moments Before Death Poem by Rex rex
Moments Before Death
Seconds before I got to the ground,
Time started slowing down.
Seconds before the poison kicked in,
Hazy memories flashed before my eyes.
Seconds before I started drowning,
My whole body felt numb.
Seconds before I pulled the trigger,
I hear my parents calling 'Son'.
And Seconds before I was going to die
I lost my will to die.
Seconds before I pulled the trigger, I hear my parents calling 'Son'. And Seconds before I was going to die I lost my will to die..........the ending was very positive. it is shines positive especially in the context of the negatives u wrote before.......... you are playing with contrasts in your poem. a wonderful technik.. tony
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5/2/2024 4:23:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A precious start indeed. Thanks