Mirrored Image Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Mirrored Image

Rating: 5.0


She pleads,
Please! Just kill my heart!
The tears rolling down
and mascara smears flowing
I am a stranger to her
but I can see
her heart breaking and bleeding.
Even though the people closest to her
don't see it.
Seeing no help from me
she says good-bye
and it echoes.
Then leaves in a cloud of pain
and surrounded by a fog of falling tears.
And I wonder
just how many times she'd done this.
She seemed so filled with hurt,
I couldn't comprehend
the full amount.
I pity her and I know she doesn't want it.
She feels as if her whole world
is upside down and spinning uncontrollably.
Nothing's right anymore, everything's changed.
Awww shit,
I'm looking in a mirror.

Dec.-14-09 (not positive of the day for sure)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kieran J96 29 July 2010

no offense romeo della valle but pplz express themselves however they want and u shouldnt suppress that, let pplz live how they want! anwyz amazing poem

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Eyan Desir 20 December 2009

You did well..I liked it A powerful emotional cry I Felt the tear drops on my shoulders you welcome

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Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2009

Please, my dear friend, watch what you write, do not use words like: S..t, we can always say the nasty things in a very sophisticated ways, no matter how mad or hurt we are, nevertheless, you let your feelings through, you got my vote,10+++(I have tried to vote and I get it through, it must be the site) Love and Peace, Romeo

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